考研英语小作文求职信（8-10分）范文赏析二

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Dear Mr. Yu,

I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Mr. Yu,

I just read an advertisement in(改为on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of(改为for) your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for(改为of) computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the(删除) Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

8分

同学你好，要注意控制字数，考研的时候超过20个词扣0.5分,超过50词只给1分辛苦分。标点符号与后面的单词空一格。你的作文没有大问题，但是你对介词的使用不太清楚，这说明你的语感还不太好，因此，建议你多读一些英文书籍。