考研英语小作文邀请信（8-10分）范文赏析二

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Dear Xiaoqiang,

There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at five Oclock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven Oclock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2012.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Xiaoqiang,

There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at five Oclock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven Oclock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2012.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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