考研英语小作文邀请信（8-10分）范文赏析一

8-10分

第一篇

Dear Dr.Wang,

There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

考研英语作文批改点评如下：

Dear Dr.Wang,

There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

9分

同学你好，作文写的很好 ，没有语法错误，但是内容要是再丰富一些会更好。